This is our first draft of our teen angst film. We showed it in front of the class and received feedback. We got told we needed to improve the volume on areas such as Sean's speech and to dip the music so it fades in and out. We also needed to improve our titles. Firstly we had plain white and dull titles. We did not have enough time to explore the different fonts and placements. In order to improve, we focused solumely on the titles and volumes because our range of camera shots were told to be excellent!We made our titles more vibrant in colour by using pink, red and purples and placed them in suitable areas such as on walls, and on the dressing table when one of the characters is getting ready. This is all seen in our final film. We decided to cut a few of our scenes as we felt they went on for too long. Our aim was to make it quick and fun! In our final draft, we cut out the end scene as it did not look like a classroom beings as the new boy asked where his English class was.
No comments:
Post a Comment